Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Breathless by Eve Carter

So this lovely author asked me to review her book and I said umm of course, I mean look at the cover, I think I might have drooled a little bit..
This book is part of a series so I am not going to rate it until I can read the other ones because this one was left on a cliffhanger and some unanswered questions that I am hoping will be answered in the next book...

The young, hot professional Motocross rider, Jesse Morrison, knows how to leave an impression. Except lately, it has been bad impressions. Frustrated and wounded, he surrounds himself with women, booze and drugs, until one day, he finds himself in a world of trouble. Kicked out by his brother, he relocates to California for the summer to help his uncle open Rookies, a local sports bar.
In Santa Monica, Jesse meets the one woman who can lead him back on the right path, the beautiful 22 year old, Niki Milani. Only problem, she is not interested. Niki has her own demons to fight. A past that left her emotional abandoned by her own blood, her father. She keeps her heart guarded and finds it difficult to trust a man again. Especially not a bad boy player who is even more messed up than her. However, Jesse never backs down from a challenge. Blinded by a sizzling attraction, he is determined to prove to Niki that there is more to him than what appears on the surface. That he is the one who can heal her heart.
The story of Jesse and Niki is a New Adult Romance that will leave you breathless.

My Thoughts

*may contain small spoilers*

When this story starts out you are inside the mind of Jesse. A bad boy with a whore, drug, and drinking problem... He is a motocross rider and he is a royal fuck up at the same time.
His brother sends his ass packing to California to help his uncle with his bar opening.
This is where we meet the second MC, Niki
Niki is a sweet girl who defies her father and instead of starting law school to become a lawyer like him, decides she wants to go to design school to see if she will like it.
Of course she doesn't tell her father and the only person that knows is her best friend and boyfriend (whom she is only dating because her dad set them up, PUKE)

Niki lives in California and she eventually meets Jesse.. They are instantly attracted to one another but Niki is hesitant because Jesse is alllll bad boy and she is not only afraid for her heart but she is also scared of the feelings she feels for him.

Its instant and magnetic

This is where I was kind of turned off because the love didn't have much build up, it was like one week they were just talking and then the next they were falling in love with one another.
Of course something does happen and they end up not together but even that kind of annoyed me because Niki was being overly dramatic about the whole thing and then she went back to being in love with Jesse, it was frustrating!

The dialogue was also a put off for me, a lot of it didn't flow and I was bored a couple of times while reading.

This book ends on a cliffhanger that I didn't see coming so I hope to find out what happens in the next book so my questions can be answered.

The book is very fast-pace and easy to read but there are times where it was slow.

There are a couple hot sex scenes that left me feeling a little wonton but it was so sexy.

Like I said before, I need to read the rest of the books in the series before I rate it because there are some questions left unanswered and the cliffhanger of course, I did not see coming until it hit me in the face!!

SO I will edit this review when the next installment is out

For now if you enjoy an instant love, bad boy, hot sex, cliffhangers, and motocross then read this book..
The next installment is set to be released in Dec.

You can get it here from Amazon:


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